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Lilly Rayman

An Unexpected Revelation

Chapter 34(12 minute read)

3/10/2016
An Unexpected Revelation is the second book of An Unexpected Trilogy. An Unexpected Bonding is the first book, published under the pen name Lilly Rayman. I have already made a start on AUR - and the current first draft file is available for anyone who wants to read the beginning of the book at the following link. This link allows you to comment on but not edit the file. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2k6hVHsIzubcVdwbDlMQU1jRGc/view?usp=sharing

Chapter Thirty-Four Laughter rang through the large communal kitchen as the she-wolves prepared platters of party food. Liv laughed beside Emily as they worked together on peeling the last sack of spuds for Emily's extra special potato salad on a large scale. The older woman couldn't help but remember the...
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Chapter 35(13 minute read)

3/10/2016
Chapter Thirty-Five. Ra is Darius' father and a vampire. He was once known as the Egyptian Sun God. Hathor is also one of the first vampires, also once referred as a goddess by the ancient Egyptians.

There was a tension in the cab of the truck, the moonlight reflecting off the gleaming bull bar as the vehicle bounced over ruts in the road that skirted along the outside of Thunder Hollow. Cash handled the vehicle over the dirt road with the ease of one who had...
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Chapter Thirty Six(14 minute read)

4/10/2016
Towards the end of this chapter, there is a brief recap of the history of vampire and wolf. This history is more in depth within the first book and is briefly handled much earlier in this book. I would appreciate any comments on whether this history is needed in this chapter, or whether I could allude to the information being given to the Sloan brothers, without repeating myself.

Livvie's jaw dropped in shock. Her elbow ended up Darius' solar plexus before the back of her hand hit his shoulder. “Please tell me I am seeing things. Did Hathor just–” “Claim Cash? Yes, she did.” Grunted Darius as he rubbed at the spot under Livvie's elbow. Only she didn't...
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Chapter Thirty-Seven(12 minute read)

17/10/2016

It was late afternoon when Eros began thrashing in the bed, terror filled his dream filled sleep as Nyx woke beside him. She couldn't help but connect with him through their bond, flashes of Persian assassins attacking him filtered into her mind. It was the night he rushed in to...
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Chapter Thirty-Seven(12 minute read)

18/10/2016

It was late afternoon when Eros began thrashing in the bed, terror filled his dream filled sleep as Nyx woke beside him. She couldn't help but connect with him through their bond, flashes of Persian assassins attacking him filtered into her mind. It was the night he rushed in to...
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Chapter Thirty-Eight - part one(8 minute read)

25/10/2016

Despite the laughter of the young wolves around him, Rance felt on edge. He was unsure if it was the knowledge that Melody was now of legal age for him to claim her completely, or if it was the shock of his friend of forty years being claimed by a...
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This cohort ended on 31st October 2016

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